
A
McTrite Horror Mystery
By Walker
Jackson
"Eat Your
Heart Out Stephen King."
Hi Walker,
I'm about
half-way through Blood Trust and
am enjoying it thoroughly!
While I didn't find McTrite as engrossing -- as I'm not much for
the genre -- it, too, was
well-written. The very idea
of Blood Trust is interesting,
and you capture the characters
well. Keep up the good work; it's
obvious that you truly enjoy
writing. Best, Mike
I met Mike at a
writing forum. He expressed an
interest in reading this horror mystery. I sent it to him.
He emailed me the above.
~ Author's
Introduction ~
Since Edgar Allan
Poe's after-spirit is an honorary
member of 'Blood Trust', a brief
excerpt taken from his 'The Devil
in the Belfry', seems a befitting
introduction to this nefarious
tale of emetic horror. His
narrative, I find, is moderately
frightening, but fiendishly
foreboding. It offers, however,
an excellent tutorial for one of
the don'ts that many contemporary
literary scholars teach: nay,
preach. Never allow description
to bring your story to a halt. I
avoid this literary sin like the
plague, but I lack perfection: a
commonality that we all share. If
I occasional fly-off on a
tangent, please forgive me. And,
if my images seem beyond belief,
accept them as intended, to
entertain.
"The good
people of the borough had
scarcely a chance, however, to
get their eyes thoroughly open,
when, just as it wanted half a
minute of noon, the rascal
bounced, as I say, right into the
midst of them; gave a chassez
here, and a balancez there; and
then, after a pirouette and a
pas-de-zephyr, pigeon-winged
himself right up into the belfry
of the House of the Town Council,
where the wonder-stricken
belfry-man sat smoking in a state
of dignity and dismay. But the
little chap seized him at once by
the nose; gave it a swing and a
pull; clapped the big chapeau
de-bras upon his head; knocked it
down over his eyes and mouth; and
then, lifting up the big fiddle,
beat him with it so long and so
soundly, that what with the
belfry-man being so fat, and the
fiddle being so hollow, you would
have sworn that there was a
regiment of double-bass drummers
all beating the devil's tattoo up
in the belfry of the steeple of
Vondervotteimittiss."
Oh heavens above,
what about that second sentence?
Do you think it's too long?
Personally, I think he could've
halved it and rendered it
kindness. I'm sure Mrs. Bennett,
my tenth-grade English teacher,
would have given him no more than
a D-minus.
Aye! But what
beautiful imagery and such
originality? And it thunders with
sadistic humor. You just know the
continuing prose will sparkle
with mayhem and machination.
Maybe today's
teachers should rethink their
standards? Or perhaps people need
to slow down and smell the
petunias. Without description, a
flower is naught. Colorful
adjectives breathe life into its
bloom. The hue is heightened or
dulled by adverb modifiers.
Though my skin
color is chartreuse and scar
tissue desecrates its onetime
sacredness; my head is cone
shaped and turned one hundred and
eighty degrees from normal; and
blood gushes from conspicuously
disarranged orifices around my
head; and I have no arms and
three eyes, one topaz, one pink,
and one the nuances of the
rainbow that change colors
continuously, don't fear me. I am
merely a storyteller anxious to
share the secrets of the dark.
As this sickly
story unfolds, I admit that I'm
enjoying my hell-bent compelling
to frighten you senseless. By all
means, keep a change of underwear
handy. Cliché yes, but timeless.
You could even be overcome with
those uncontrollable nervous
giggles that obsess the mind when
fear invades the psyche. Nay!
Don't be alarmed. It's merely
your over-active imagination
playing games with your mind.
Aye-e-e-e!
Did your blood curdle? Mine
turned to clabber. Because, I
know the evil scream blasted
straight out of hell. Ah! I alone
know what lurks in the
encroaching shadows?
Grab several barf
bags then head for your bedroom.
Sprinkle some scare-away voodoo
dust around your bed, torch
several purple candles, polish
and kiss your talisman, check
under the bed, now the closets.
If all is safe, or seems normal,
climb between the sheets, pop in
earplugs to muffle the screams
and strange night sounds.
Do you own eye
blinders? Don them if visions of
grotesque spooks unnerve
you. Is your pulse beating
faster? Are you having misgivings
about reading this book? Don't be
a fraidy-cat. I triple-dog dare
you. S-l-o-w-l-y, turn the
page. Stop! Quickly, now, run
check the shower. And be sure to
peek under the sheet for
creepy-crawly things before you
climb back into bed.
~ Prologue
~
A young couple,
Frances and Charles Taylor,
married only two days, perished
when their Porsche rolled three
times on State Route 26, two
miles west of Hobgoblin,
Mississippi. They were passing
through on their way to a Biloxi
honeymoon. The speedometer was
stuck at 101 mph reported Officer
Jim Smith after their mutilated
bodies were torched from the
wreckage and taken to
Higgenbothem's Mortuary. A
close-up picture of the
flattened-mangled Porsche was
there on the front page of Crypt
News to provoke readers to the
verge of regurgitation.
Wednesday, one day
later, young Ben Somers, home
from Harvard for spring break,
died when his Ford convertible
veered out of control on Suicide
Curve and rolled thrice. At the
time, he was attempting to break
the speed record of 95 MPH set by
Claude Vann three years earlier
so said Tim Conners a friend of
Ben's. Somers' lifeless, bloody,
fractured body was taken to
Higgenbothem's Mortuary. Tim
Conners, who miraculously escaped
injury, told police that Ben was
drinking excessively. It was
widely known that Ben was an
exemplar and this fact shed
considerable doubt on Conner's
revelations. And his death was
quietly being investigated.
The timing of
these gruesome accidents was
perfect, considering the first
meeting of Blood Trust convened
sharply midnight Saturday at
historical Chimerical Manor, a
haunted mansion owned by Benson
Ballard. Residents of Hobgoblin
had avoided this demoniac mansion
for sixty years. Absolutely no
one, except members of the Blood
Trust, who would learn in time
that their pseudo courage was
enormously inadequate, one weird
relative, ignorant strangers, and
Ballard's freaky butler James
Fry, whose hair had turned from
black to white after his first
week at the mansion, would
voluntarily venture within one
block of this spook shack.
Looking gothic, mystic, grossly
menacing, it rose three stories
above terra firma, casting evil
shadows upon the Garden of
Deadly Delights out back near
the family burial grounds.
City streets
surrounding this haunted manor
were devoid of homes. Benson's
Grandfather George Ballard once
farmed the many acres of land
surrounding the Manor. As the
Town's population grew, George
subdivided, developed the land,
and became quite wealthy. Avarice
became one of his many middle
nicknames. Swindler was often
used. Now, lots on the block
could be purchased for one
dollar, but they weren't selling
like hot cakes: not one had sold
in the last fifteen years.
Though handsome,
George was an effeminate, fragile
man, ethereal may better describe
him, but he gave an outward
appearance of heterosexuality
that convinced even the more
cynical citizens. Certainly,
after he married and was elected
a deacon in the Hobgoblin First
Baptist Church. Silvia, his wife
birthed Thurman Ballard, Benson's
father. Twin girls were
prematurely born two years later,
but they were dead. Nearly
expiring during their birth,
Silvia decided to have a
hysterectomy. Afterwards she
became frigid and Thurman started
seeing other women on the sly.
And rumors had it that he visited
several male lovers when he
traveled. Silvia died two years
later of mysterious causes that
were never discovered, and she
was buried next to the two
deformed girls in the family
cemetery in close proximity of
the garden that became known as
the Garden of Death.
Perhaps a short
explanation of this lethal Garden
would prove interesting?
Grandfather George Ballard hated
the wildlife that came and
mooched from the growing fields.
But in time the garden provided
the demented lineage another
service: namely, a source for
hard to detect poisons after
assimilation by the body.
Unfortunately for George the wild
animals were too smart to partake
of the Garden's delights. George
was obviously out of touch with
nature. But he grew to admire the
variety of flowers the poisonous
plants produced.
Well, let me name
a few of the deadly delights. The
Solanaceae family, including
nightshade, henbane, jimson weed,
mandrake, tobacco, and the leaves
of tomatoes, are poisonous. They
contain toxic alkaloids.
Cyanide sources
also grew in the garden.
Rosaceae, a member of the rose
family, contain compounds called
cyanogenic glycosides that
liberate cyanide when broken down
in the body. The lethal dose is
one part to a million by body
weight. He also cultivated one
each wild cherry, peach and pear
tree, which are all kin to the
rose family. Their seeds contain
the toxic glycosides that are
fatale in large dosages. And he
cultivated many poisonous
mushrooms too numerous to mention
without boring.
Most notably he
cultivated yew, which is known as
the bastard killer. The poison is
an alkaloid named taxine, which
first causes gastrointestinal
upset and then convulsions.
Finally, after much pain, the
heart stops beating. And usually
you expire. This ornamental shrub
was once used as an
abortifacient, but unfortunately
or fortunately, depending upon
one's viewpoint, it kills the
mother as often as it kills her
fetus. Some suspected that
Benson's mother was fed this
poison during her pregnancies
with Benson's stillborn sisters.
These are but a few delicacies
awaiting you at Chimerical Manor.
Please help yourself. Especially
-- Well, you know who you are.
Thurman Ballard,
Benson's father, increased the
family's fortunes with profits
from family owned sawmills, which
were located advantageously
around the pinewoods of
Mississippi. Not that the world
will care appreciably but Thurman
was bisexual. Though he leaned
more towards women than men and
kept several mistresses, but men
also visited the Manor. Lucky for
Benson, Miss Claudia Frick, a
beautiful, voluptuous blonde and
Thurman's favorite mistress,
committed the sin that conceived
Benson. The poor little rich boy
was born a bastard. And he blamed
his mother for her loose
behavior. In time this demeaning
stigma twisted his mind, turning
him against women, and ultimately
pushed him to homosexuality. But
more likely his family genes are
a more plausible explanation for
his abnormalities.
Through the years,
three of Thurman's mistresses met
their demise in hideous ways.
Perky and pretty Caroline Oliver
was decapitated. Her long
beautiful curls were first
sheared from her head.
Dorothy Peacock, a
stunning brunette, was split in
half by the ripsaw in the
basement.
And Louise Dobb's,
a delightful thespian with a
nightingale's voice, throat was
slit and her breasts and uterus
surgically removed.
These heinous
crimes went undetected because
the women's bodies were concealed
in crypts in the basement
dungeon: a secret place
accessible only through a door
disguised as a panel section
located in the library.
Alas, it wasn't
until Thurman was bludgeoned to
death that Benson learned of the
secret and found keys to the
dungeon and the secret passage
where he found the women's nude
bodies. He was only eighteen at
the time. Personal shame and
embarrassment for his father
drove him to keep the murdered
women a secret.
The Police, after
years of investigations, charged
Doctor Earnest Forel, a surgeon
and frequent male guest at the
Manor, with the bludgeon death of
Thurman. But a clever defense
attorney used the lack of
eyewitnesses and false evidence,
from a scoundrel paid to testify
that the evil doctor was
elsewhere when the crime was
committed, to obtain a not-guilty
verdict. The doctor was killed in
an accident years later and
justice was served. The gas truck
he struck head-on exploded,
burning him beyond recognition,
negating the need for his
cremation as decreed by his will.
Claudia Frick,
Benson's mother, dearly loved
both him and his father. For
years she pleaded with Thurman to
marry her and finally lost all
hope. One morning quite early she
went to the garden of death and
consumed water hemlock. When the
pain in her abdomen struck like a
knife stab, she fell prostrate on
the ground urinating
uncontrollably.
In minutes she was
seized with convulsions and lost
all of her senses. Her mouth
clamed shut like a vice: so
tightly she could not open it to
scream; she could only groan. She
grated her teeth; her eyes
twisted strangely and blood
flowed from her ears. A swelling
the size of a cantaloupe grew in
her abdomen. She hiccuped
frequently, and at times tried to
vomit, but she could force
nothing through her mouth. When
the convulsions ceased
momentarily, she had second
thoughts and tried in vain to
scream for help.
Momentarily,
convulsions returned with
increased violence. Soon, her
strength and will to live were
gone. Turning pale she gasped her
last breath. Immediately, green
froth started spewing from her
mouth and continued even to the
hour of her burial. It was wiped
away frequently by Benson her
grieving son. This traumatic
experience served to further
twist his mind, and he never
forgave his father for not marry
his mother. He did, however,
insist that his mother be buried
in the family cemetery. He'd
celebrated gleefully when he
learned of his father's brutal
murder.
This baseborn and
despicable family wasn't the only
weird creatures abiding in
Hobgoblin, Mississippi, but they
were the most infamous and
freakish. And the Manor wasn't
the only haunted place in this
spooky town. It'd become a Mecca
of true horror fulfillment and
people came from far and near to
be frightened out of their hides.
Bed and breakfasts with names
like Horror Inn, Ghost Aplenty,
and The Laboratory offered
discounts and gift certificates
to customers who stayed the
entire night. And in the morning
for breakfast they were served
glasses of tomato juice symbolic
of blood and scrambled eggs with
hog brains mixed in. Little
horror shops were everywhere.
Visions and thoughts of death
were inescapable.
~ Chimerical Manor
~
At eleven-thirty
p.m., cars started arriving and
parking around the circular
drive: one Cadillac, one Lincoln
Town-Car, One Mercedes Benz, One
beat-up old red Ford truck, and
two Honda Accords. James Fry,
Benson Ballard's butler, met each
arrival with a grim smile, a
foreboding gesture, then offered
instruction...
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